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These day, mainly, from Christmas, I hardly uplodaded nothing in DeviantArt. I was busy in the work. January, in Spain, is the month in which the Government wants the annual taxes reports sent, and that means a huge amount of administrative work that it is added to the ordinary work. Also, in my free time, I am advancing an old literay project that it is not intended for publication here, so I only uploaded some photos that I did a month ago.
But, this night I will upload a new chapter of Chrystalle's diary and I hope that I will continue uploading new ones, because they are already written.
For finishing, I must tell that I bought two things for my camera. The first one was a rechargeable battery, because the Lithium ones were very expensive and I had to change it each month. The second one is a tripod, a very cheap one. I will use it for performing videos and certain artistic photos involving chess or go boards, for instance.
I will start to fill my profile. First of all, I must say that English is not my native tongue, so I would like to apologise for the mistakes in my texts. If your mother tongue is English, your corrections will be welcome.
I will use this place to publish erotic tales. I am too shy for writting this kind of literature, so in this profile I will always remain annonymous.
A very important remark is that my writtings are intended to be respectful with the women (and with the men). I will never write about humiliations, rapes or other kind of topics that could be interpreted as a defense of treating women as if they were born only to be sexual objects. If you think that this is my goal then, probably, I will need to improve a lot my English.
I hope that you enjoy my writtings, when published.
It took me a while to find a moment to look over here, but I rather am interested to seeing where some of the stories you have posted develop. And your photography is absolutely gorgeous.
Thank you very much. I am glad because you liked my photos . In connection with the place where Chrystalle's diary and the other stories take place, are you talking about a description of the countries, or about a map? I must warn, althought, probably you have noticed, that my stories here are completely 'mature content'. They have a lot of eroticism. If you are looking for a description about the countries, I can write some text about them. Ask me for it, it would be a good deviation . In advance, the stories take place in Zanthoxorn, that is a purely human kingdom (no elven, no dwarfs, no goblins...) similar in technology to european 15th century. I have not decided completely yet, but the most similar country could be England. Zanthoxornian people are mainly white, perhaps nordic, but with a little mix of other people due to invasions in the past (as romans, saxons, normands, vikings and others invaded Great Britain). It is a conventional feudal monarchy. There exists magic, but it is controled by the Government and it is not seeing a lot in daily life. Magic comes in two 'versions': spells and potions. The most known spell is the 'Reduction spell' that is casted on some male babies for creating small people, suitable for certain jobs. Potions are very expensive, but they have a lot of uses. In Chrystalle's story, she tells about a potion for avoid getting pregnant, and another one for protecting herself of venereal diseases. Thank you for you interest on my writings and photos
In connection with the "Brought up for Serving" chapters/diary entries, I was talking about the plot and the characters (Chrystalle, Henry, Charles, et cetera...)and how as you have continued writing and getting more into her "voice" and the world, it has grown. For example, the most recent entry has a lot more description going on both in her talking about what she sees and what's happened and the other male characters personalities are starting to become more distinct and real, particularly compared with the first two or three chapters. Seeing more of it as you continue (if you choose) is something worth seeing I think. Your description of the kingdom and world she lives in would be nice as an entry on its own as background material. But I think such knowledge of the countries and people would be best told by Crystalle herself within the story (such as her conversations with Charles, those were some of the best parts). I know you've said English is not your first language, but as a writer-in-progress myself and a native speaker and reader, I have you say you're doing pretty well so far.Usually eroticism isn't my first choice, but I don't mind mature content if it's handled with care and respect as part of the story, if you get my meaning.
Thank you for your comment. I am glad to hear that my English is not awful . I had misundertood a little bit. Sometimes I have been told about drawing a map of the kingdoms or the world in which my stories take place. But your were talking about a more important thing. In all my writings I use to be "obsessed" with depicting the characters' personality. I love realistic and "living" characters and if I start to like what I'm writing, characters starts to develop their personalities even if that was not planned. Charles is the best example here, but Jeff's inexperience with women was also not planned. I have written several entries of Chrystalle's diary that I have not published yet, and I am working in the way that you have told. I am preparing some important events of the plot and I am telling more about Chrystalle's personality and about other miners' desires and "past life". I also agree in with must be Chrystalle the person in charge of telling us information about Zanthoxorn while she writes her diary.
A very important thing for finishing. It is the first time that I write erotic literature and I am also obsessed with writing a respectful story, so I think that I get what you are meaning. Chrystalle's personality and background are oriented to that. In particular, she is a sex slave but she is not docile, neither she likes to be forced to sleep with everybody. I never write about a person, specially a woman, who is damaged, humiliated or dominated and she enjoys with that. Also, I will remark something that could be "cultural". The erotic scenes that I depict are usually very "light" according to Spain. In Spain, in summer, it is usual to see, in any beach, women sunbathing without the upper part of her "bikinis". Sunbathing completely naked is only permitted in special beaches, but a lot of women shows her naked breasts in any beach and it is not banned neither considered obscene. I intend to say that see women in "top-less" is a very light kind of eroticism for spanish standards. Depticting other parts of women's bodies is not so 'light' so I do not feel comfortable. By this, I usually do not explain how Chrystalle takes her panties off
De nada. Y, bueno, te entiendo en lo del castellano, pero lo hago todo en inglés para reforzar el anonimato. Por un lado, me resulta muy incómodo escribir narrativa erótica, por el otro, era un tipo de escritos que tenía en la cabeza y que querían salir. Hacerlo en inglés tiene el inconveniente de que me limita un poco, aunque me ha sorprendido la rapidez con la que consigo escribir en ese idioma. Por supuesto, cualquier inglés nativo encontrará "raro" mi estilo. Sin embargo, escribir erótica en castellano me resulta muy difícil, mientras que en inglés me suelto mucho más. De todos modos, es posible que incluya una versión en castellano de un relato corto que estoy acabando de revisar. Gracias por el comentario y nos leemos
Te comprendo perfectamente. A mí me pasaba lo mismo cuando probé ese estilo de escritura, hace algún tiempo. Pero, aunque ya no me resulta incómodo, la verdad es que yo no me atrevería a subirlo a deviantart
Te animo igualmente a que incluyas ese relato en castellano Te entiendo sin problema en inglés, pero me gustaría leerte en nuestra lengua, entre otras cosas porque creo que podrías mostrar mejor tu habilidad al no tener tantos límites.